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To Petr.

🔗robert thomas martin <robertthomasmartin@...>

8/23/2008 9:49:42 AM

I was eventually able to link up to your two musical pieces.
I was impressed with the first piece and considered the second
piece as unremarkable.
Concerning the first piece: It seemed to go from an authentically
sounding S.E.Asian sound via a transition to an authentically sounding
West Indian sound. I liked it very much but think you should lose the
transition and tighten up the change of sounds so that the transition
is more smooth and seamless so that it comes as a pleasant surprise to
the listener.