New Member... New Song...

Dia Duibh!!!
I am new to this group, and thought I would introduce myself. I am
17yo from NC. I started playing guitar 2 years ago, and piano 10
years ago. I started writing music several years before I started
playing guitar, but never went anywhere with it. In the last few
months, I have started to write songs more naturally, and readliy.
Here is one of my first songs(it is as of yet, still unfinished):

Verse:
Our grandfathers were dirty, rotten bigots
And our fathers too, they learned it from their dads
Now its just me and you, were fighting over nothing
Where did you think we got it from

Middle 8:
We follow in their footsteps
We make the same mistakes
History has tought us nothing
Except to fight each day we wake

Here it returns to the verse with several word changes, then back
to the mid-8. It ends with the mid-8 up 1\2 to 1 step with different
words, but you can get the jist of the song here.

Please send me your thoughts.
I will try to post a clip of this later if you guys would like to
hear it.
Thanks,
Stíofaín, Líam Ó Murchada