Orwellian Cameras - orchestral - work in progress

I decided to have a go at doing some real voice leading in Orwell 13 which of course necessitates some harmonic movement.

Right now this is for Garritan Personal Orchestra strings, choir, and percussion - though I hear a place for a flute.

The beginning is a bit iffy - the 2nd half perhaps too boring. I need to stop at this point and get some work done on my house.

online listen
http://notonlymusic.com/board/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=437&start=0

download
http://notonlymusic.com/board/download/file.php?id=881

The tuning is

! 13-31a.scl
!
31-tET Orwell[13]
13
!
38.70968
154.83871
270.96774
309.67742
425.80645
541.93548
580.64516
696.77419
812.90323
851.61290
967.74194
1083.87097
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